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Jeff Craigmile's avatar

First, I want to say your work on this book is inspiring. I'm as excited to read it as I am watching you write it.

Good luck with the outlining process. Sometimes I outline, sometimes I wing it and work it in later.

Second, I like this title better. From my experiences in watching others go through the process, we discovered that shorter titles are better. Having a word or phrase like Unclockable really sticks out! Keep that up!

Have a great week. No pressure. Can't wait to see the next update.

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Fidencio Lopez's avatar

I like that introduction and the way in which you gradually enter the reader who lives with the concern of managing his time to a scenario that perhaps he does not imagine. I like the use of words like '' effortless action '' but above all, as you introduce the term '' ONE '' in capital letters as a hidden reference to consciousness and its awakening. I think that as the book develops, this word will reveal itself and develop with greater relevance.

I also like the new title UNCLOCKABLE I think it sounds very European or Western as if referring to our busy daily life. I think you could even add to the cover of the book when it's done a picture of the rabbit from Alice in Wonderland with its huge clock and its characteristic rush. Well, he is a character that is very similar to us in our current relationship with time. I like what you have written and it reminds me of your concern to create a movement that helps us all to wake up. I think that collaborating in the process of your book is making me very enthusiastic. Thank you very much for making us part of this.

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